I think the head might be a bit small. Other then that it looks fairly good. If thats supposed to be an AK47, best rework it. I think the barrel is the main problem.
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Well, it is an Aderan Wars Machine Gun
If you would see the whole weapon, you would see that it actually has 4 barrels attached to each other.
The gun has a pretty horrible stock or "butt", from both a drawing and design perspective. A gun with 4 barrels will require some type of cooling, either the traditional air-cooled or a Gatling setup. It would also need about 4 times the ammunition per magazine (the average AK-47 has between 20 to 30 rounds, 40 with a banana, and more with drum or belt fed configurations). I suggest looking at an AK-47 or similar weapons. Also, he is gripping the gun very oddly. Normally you grip the bottom of the wood, not the top, even if he is standing at attention/parade.
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Also its an Assualt Rifle, not a machine gun.
The name of the weapon is Aderan Machine Gun.
Besides, you cannot know what kind of weapon it is, if its a sci fi weapon and you didnt see all of it, or you didnt see it in action.
Besides, Kalashnikov has also designed Machine Guns:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RPK
Fairly good. But to answer what is wrong with the guns butt... It is too bulky, it resebles too much a rectangular prism, it need to be slimer with a slight curve or angle (depending on the era or style), if not those than more rounded. The idea of the butt's design is to be able support the gun resting on it, but also to be able to fit in the "pocket" between the shoulder and chest and clavical. Also is that a shirt or a jacket. If jacket, it needs to overlap the pants. But as a shirt, the waist line is low. And possibly pull the pockets out more to the side (butthey are fine where they are). If this is for animaton then ignore this, belt loops. will say this, nice detail on the gun. missing some minor details, but as I said, ignore those if for animation- tiny details aren't worth the burden. But those minor parts are ones that are for every style gun (for removing jams). But this does look very much like an AK-47. Also for this to be a four barrel machine gun, less it fires slowly, needs either a barrel clip or a belt feed (belt feed would require a lot of reqork). And needs more ejection ports.
mickster is right, if you play alot of warfare games, or atleast have some experience in the military, you would know that the gun's butt is totally off, it is supposed to be curved arround the bottom, to provide an arch for the soldier, when he is shooting while crouching, and also allows for better aim
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why IS his head so small?
WHY is his head SO small?
Honestly it looks like a zombified Galil
mickster
that guns butt isnt right..the whole gun is offXD if u spend that much detail on a character..atleast spend more detail on the gun too ^^
Kenzu
What's wrong with the guns "butt"?